Crimson Scars - Comics - Chapter 1, Page 18

» Comics - Chapter 1, Page 18 - 11 Feb 2009 07:05 pm

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Author Comments:

Crystalbear, 11 Feb 2009 07:07 pm

Banner updated! - Yeah, the banner has finally been updated. Okay so there isn't much going
on with it, but at least its better than before. Anyhow, I really like how
this page turned out. One of my better pages for sure.

There has been a lack of comments lately than I normally gotten during the
days of CS's prologue. I know that creating the comic is more important
than fanbase, but the reason I liked getting comments is because I thrive
on constructive criticism. With criticism, I know where and how to improve,
and I know what some people may want to see. So while comments isn't everything,
I'm sure you can understand that, right?...

Anyhow, enjoy this page.

Reader Comments:

	Want some comments do you? Well Shadow Bijou delivers! In terms of improvement, I think the best areas for you to do that are in the eyes and the mouth. Sometimes it's really well done (such as with Akame in the 1st and 3rd panels) and sometimes it doesn't quite look right to me (Haruka in the 1st and 2nd panels, Akame in the last). Hope that helps =) Anyway, with the improvement stuff out the way, time to make you feel good! The backgrounds are very well done, colouring is also great. Also all of the poses look very accurate, as do the body shapes most of the time. How's that? Did I make you feel good? ^^ Haha. posted by Shadow Bijou on 11 Feb 2009 07:22 pm
	Lol. Haruka's still got the acorn, lawl. posted by Le Jelleh on 12 Feb 2009 10:03 am
	a female pikachu's tail is more heart shaped at the end, it looks like a pokemon with a beak bit it. that's the only thing i can contribute really, other than ask how akame's wounds magically appeared between this page and the previous one. posted by DragonhandX on 12 Feb 2009 03:10 pm
	Because in my other pages where the wounds disappear, I forgot to draw them. :/ Yeah I know her tail is supposed to be more heart shaped, but beak shape is more easier. posted by Crystalbear on 12 Feb 2009 10:28 pm
	Practice Pikachu tails :x I suggest using a smaller brush size for details :3 posted by zetina on 13 Feb 2009 04:32 am
	I tried. Brush size 3 was just too small for me. :/ posted by Crystalbear on 13 Feb 2009 05:43 pm
	just make it a lower case 'm', i want a tablet. posted by DragonhandX on 13 Feb 2009 05:49 pm
	A lower case m? Huh.... I never use a tablet. It constantly gets in my way and makes drawing harder. :/ posted by Crystalbear on 13 Feb 2009 06:00 pm
	in this case a tablet will help show what i mean. in my science class, a way to remember the formula for density is to draw a heart, and draw a line through the middle making what looks like m/V i'm suggesting the opposite strategy in a way. posted by DragonhandX on 13 Feb 2009 10:12 pm