Crimson Scars - Comics - Chapter 1, Page 10

» Comics - Chapter 1, Page 10 - 17 Nov 2008 08:29 pm

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Author Comments:

Crystalbear, 17 Nov 2008 08:30 pm

- And we finally learn the name of the Honckrow gangster, Shouta. Eventually
I will add him to the cast page, along with our Pikachu friend, but that
won't come until we hear the Pikachu's side of the story later on.

This page wasn't as great as the other, I don't think I put much effort
into drawing it. And I didn't color it in either. Sorry. Also I forgot
to draw the white rings under Shouta's eyes in some of the panels.....

If you couldn't tell, Shouta was perched on a tree and Akame leaped up
onto one of the stronger branches. I intended to draw a shadow under
Akame, but it seems I've forgotten that too. :/

Reader Comments:

Hmm..I think you made a typo in the last panel, first word bubble.
"You're not great, you're but a coward."
should probably be
"You're not great, but you're a coward."

Otherwise this page is good, whatever you think. ^^

posted by Flame Shadow on 17 Nov 2008 09:12 pm

It's actually supposed to be "You're but a coward." But good notice though.

Thank you. :)

posted by Crystalbear on 17 Nov 2008 09:13 pm

Ohh..gotcha.. sry! ^^

posted by Flame Shadow on 18 Nov 2008 05:22 am